해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it’s better to exercise outdoor than in gym with equipment.
There is a few reasons.
First, exercise outdoor can breathe fresh air.
And fresh air makes exercise more efficient.
And second, exercise outdoor is more fun than in a gym.
For example treadmills is so boring.
I can only run on treadmills by 20 minutes.
But when I running in the outdoor, I can run one hour.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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