해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The picture was taken at an office.
Well, I see saw a man he is holding some documents.
And Next to him, a woman is holding a cup.
And they are looking at some the documents that the man is holding
They are wearing a suits.
On the right side of the picture, i can see a printer.
Behind them, I can see a glass conference room.
The place is crowded by glass.
Everything in this picture seems peaceful.
-> 사소한 실수와 불필요한 문장이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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