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There is are two women and two men in this picture.

And left side is company’s meeting room.

And they are working in the a company.

In the middle of the picture, a man and a woman are talking.

Next to them, there is a copy machine.

Behind of them, I can see meeting rooms.

And right side is print machine and plants.

And left side door is glass.

And they are talking.

-> 과도한 접속사의 사용은 피해주시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.

또한 그림을 묘사하실 때 흐름에 맞게 묘사하시면 조금 더 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다.

수고하셨습니다.