해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I like to go to often restaurants outside.
Because it is good to for relieving a stress.
I like to spend time eating or talking with my friends at restaurants.
I can there for by spending time with my friends such as eating or talking each other.
It makes me left and feel comfortable, relax and makes me feel I’m alive.
it will be live to me
more active fun moments.
-> 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 완벽한 문장을 구사하시는 연습이 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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