해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Seems I think this picture is was taken in the garden of their house.
There are two people and they look like an old are a couple.
A man and a woman they seem old.
They are wearing gloves and planting the flowers which are yellow flowers in a pot and orange.
And it seems the weather looks is really nice.
And they are wearing gloves as well.
-> 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 주어진 그림에 대한 조금 더 구체적인 설명이 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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