해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in a garden.
I can see two older old people in the picture.
and they looks like in the garden.
And he is planting a yellow flowers in the a vase.
And she is looks like helping him.
Behind them, there is a mountain are mountains
And behind them, there are many flowers.
And Around them, there are many gardening tools.
-> 문장의 흐름이 부자연스러워 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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