해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The picture was taken at a garden.
In the middle of the picture, I can see an old couple. one grandfather and one grandmother.
A grandfather man has a white hair and he is wearing a green t-shirt with white hair.
And he is touching planting some flowers.
Next to him, a grandmother woman is wearing a hat and she is wearing a blue t-shirt.
They both of them are wearing gloves.
And both are touching flowers.
-> 전반적으로 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 만드시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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