해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
At a garden, I can see two people in this picture.
They are at a garden.
The people On the right side of the picture, There is a woman wearing a hat is wearing and gloves on her hand.
And people On the left side of the picture there is a man he is planting the some flowers in the a pot.
On In the background of the picture, I can see gardening tools and trees.
Overall, it looks peaceful.
-> 어색한 부분이 있어 수정이 필요했지만 그림에 대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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