해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This photo was taken at an office.
Firstly First, I can see two people are having a conversation.
I think a the man is explaining something about the papers he is holding a paper and seems to be explain something.
And he is wearing formal clothes. uniforms.
In the background, I can see two other people are watching them.
And also there is a table and a chair.
Well, Everything seems looks for peaceful.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 실수가 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사하시는 연습이 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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