I believe think it’s better to exercise in the a gym with equipment is more better because of the weather.
You know we can use The heater and air conditioner are available in the gym.
Therefore, So, we can exercise everytime and anywhere and every days regardless of whether it rains or snows or space and time.
We don’t have to worry about the weather.
Even though during the raining.
And we can do various exercises without going outside using the equipment in the gym. still can running or anything else we can do that.
But exercise in outdoors is almost depends on the weather.
So, I think believe the gym it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment is more better.
-> 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 작성해 주셨지만, 문법적 실수가 많아 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.





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