해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Actually, As I said, I really do not often go to the restaurants outside this neighborhood. that I told you.
This is because I really like to cook and eat at home. to eat inside of my home.
And I like cook.
So, I don’t need to go to restaurants.
That is I think It is a waste of wasting my money and time. wasting.
My time going outside preparing for outside.
So, I like to eat at home in my house with my friends or with my family.
-> 주어진 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 해주셨지만 사소한 실수가 많아 수정이 필요했습니다.
조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사해주시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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