해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I agree that the most important aspect of a job is the money a prrson earns.
Mostly, It can motivate the employees.
So, They can work hard.
For my experience, I worked at a software company.
But, I earned less.
So, I got a lot of stress and I didn’t want to go to work.
So, As a result, I couldn’t focus on my works.
So, I left the company very quickly.
I agree that the most important aspect of a job is the money a prrson earns.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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