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**ley1 | 2024.11.04 | 조회 94
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise outdoors.

Because we can exercise with my friends.

When I was a high school student, I exercised in a gym with equipment.

So, I am always alone.

But, now a days I like soccer and tennis like exercise outdoors.

Then As a result I can make a lot of friends by soccer and tennis.

Therefore I think it is better to exercise outdoors than in a gym with equipment.



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