해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture is was taken on in front of the a garden.
I can see one a man and a woman are in the middle of the picture.
They’re both wearing gloves.
And they are trying to plant a yellow flowers on in a small pot.
And I can see some other gardening tools equipment around them.
Also, In the background of the picture, I can see is the beautiful scenery of the mountain.
-> 사소한 실수가 많이 발견되어 수정이 필요했지만 그림에 대한 묘사를 구체적으로 잘 해주셨습니다.
수고하셨습니다
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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