해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in an the office.
And In the middle of the picture, I can see two people.
One woman and one man are in front of a printer.
The woman is holding a cup of the coffee and looking at the papers the man is holding.
And the another two other people are behind them.
I think they are and watching looking at the people in front of them.
And the woman in front of the printer is holding a cup of coffee and watching the paper.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사가 부족해, 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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