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I think it is better to exercise outdoors.

This is because we I can exercise with my friends.

When I was in a high school student, I exercised in a gym with equipment.

So, I am But, I always had to work out alone and felt bored.

After that, I started sports that I can do outdoors like soccer and tennis, and I can make many friends thanks to this.

But, now a days I like soccer and tennis like exercise outdoors.

Then As a result I can make a lot of friends by soccer and tennis.

Therefore, I think it is better to exercise outdoors than in a gym with equipment.

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