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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I believe exercise in the gym is better than exercise outdoors.

I think like that because if I exercise in the gym, I can use various equipment that I can use.

and also with equipment I can hall the group halls when I do so

e exercise

and also for the weather if i try to exercise outdoors i can not do it when it’s too hot or when it’s too cold.

but in the gym because temperature will be quite clear and fresh.

i can exercise as much as I want

so I prefer exercise in the gym.



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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