I believe think it is better to exercise in the a gym is better than to exercise outdoors.
I think like that because if I exercise in the a gym,
I can use various equipment to work out. that I can use.
And I can take classes held in groups if I work out in a gym with equipment. with equipment I can hall the group halls when I do exercise.
And I can also exercise without being affected by the weather.
for the weather if i try to exercise outdoors I can not do it
when exercising outdoors, it’s too hard to exercise when It is too hot or when it’s too cold.
But, I can exercise refreshingly in a gym at the good temperature.
In the gym because temperature will be quite clear and fresh.
And I can exercise as much as I want regardless of time.
So, For these reasons, I prefer to exercise in the a gym.
-> 주어진 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 해주셨지만, 문법에서 많은 오류가 발생해 전체적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 정확한 문장을 만드시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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