I think schools should have a special day each year students help to clean the school.or me it was great. because i was able to make a good class atmosphere.on top of that. the school
according to recent news report.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, students can make a good class atmosphere.
From my experience, when I was a student, students I helped to clean the school. It was really good for me.
I could get close to my friends.
Also, according to recent news reports, students can feel more comfortable if they help to clean their schools.
according to recent news report.
the majority of people in korea said that students should help to clean their schools the school.
This is because they think it is the best way for students to feel more comfortable.
-> 문법적 오류가 많아 수정이 필요했으며, 자신의 생각에 대한 근거가 충분하지 않다고 판단됩니다. 특히 중복된 표현이 많아 생략이 필요했습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
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