해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This seems It looks like it’s an nice office space.
The glassy office space looks very simple and good.
And There are a total of four people in the picturebackground.
Two of them whom are talking in front of the printer.
One there is a man holding some documents paper.
Well, female Next to him, there is a woman holding a hot cup.
They seem to be talking about the documents.
In the background, another man and a woman are walking forward.
there is also one man and one female.
In this picture, there are total two females as well as two males.
The office space is very nice and simple.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 구체적인 묘사를 잘 해주셨으나, 전반적으로 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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