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문강현 | 2024.11.15 | 조회 103

사는 곳 - 집의 모습 묘사 

I live in a house near 통영. My house is very spacious and modern. 

My house has stone walls and wooden ceilings. 

And my house is a two-story house. 

There are five bedrooms in my house. 

It also has three bathrooms, two kitchens, and two living rooms. 

The living room has a balcony with a great view of the farmland.


동네 및 이웃 – 동네에서 있었던 기억에 남는 경험

Usually, my neighborhood is very quiet.

However, recently, it’s very noisy because the road is under construction.

It was very noisy, so it’s been hard to forget.

Also, the traffic is bad because the road is closed.

The construction started three months ago.

It will be over soon.


수영 – 수영의 장점과 선호하는 이유

Swimming is good because I don't sweat.

Thanks to this, I don't feel any discomfort during my exercise.

But other exercises require me to change clothes because of sweat.

Also, swimming is easy on the back.

That's why I like swimming.

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