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첨삭지기 | 2024.11.20 | 조회 99

사는 곳 - 집의 모습 묘사 

I live in a house near Tongyeong. My house is very spacious and modern. 

My house has stone walls and wooden ceilings. 

And My house is a two-story house. 

There are five bedrooms in my place house. 

It also has three bathrooms, two kitchens, and two living rooms. 

The living room has a balcony with a great view of the farmland.

And My house contains of stone walls and wooden ceilings.



동네 및 이웃 – 동네에서 있었던 기억에 남는 경험

Usually, my neighborhood is very quiet.

However, recently, its It has become very noisy because the road is under construction.

It was very noisy, so it’s been hard to forget.

Also, the traffic is bad because the road is closed due to the construction, so there is a lot of traffic.

The construction started three months ago.

It will be over soon.

But I don’t think I can forget the very noisy experience.



수영 – 수영의 장점과 선호하는 이유

Swimming is good because I don't have to sweat.

Thanks to this, I don't have to feel uncomfortable while exercising. any discomfort during my exercise.

But other exercises require me to change clothes because of sweat.

Also, Backstroke is easy to learn. swimming is easy on the back.

That's why I like swimming.


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