해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in an office.
There are four people in this picture.
And they are wearing suits all.
In the middle of the picture, there are two people standing in front of a printer.men.
And they are they seem like discussing something to each other while looking at some documents one of them is holding. watching a paper.
Behind them, there are two people are standing.
And it seems like they are waiting for something.
And they are wearing suits all.
-> 주어진 그림에 대해 구체적으로 잘 묘사해 주셨지만, 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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