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Yes, I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
Especially, I often go to my favorite restaurant.
There are some two reasons.
First, it relieves my stress.
I’m under a lot of stress stressed out these days.
So, I often visit there because I feel good when I eat delicious food.
So, I need this.
Second, the restaurants is inside the department store, So I can go shopping after a meal. When i go to restaurants outside, I can go to department stores too.
Therefore, I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
-> 자신의 생각을 잘 구사해 주셨지만, 다소 어색한 부분이 발생하여 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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