해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in the outside.
The first thing I can see is that there are two people in the middle of the picture.
A man has a gray white-haired man hair and a woman wearing a hat are planting flowers.
And behind them of the picture, I can see some of trees and a mountain.
Overall, it seems like they are planting flowers.
-> 어색한 문장이 많아 수정이 필요했으며, 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 필요한 것으로 보입니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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