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I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

The first of all, when If I exercise in the a gym, I can exercise without getting rained on or snow. weather rain or whether it’s snow I can exercise indoors. 

So, it is better to exercise in a gym.

And Secondly, there are many different lots of various equipment available in a gym. I can use them.

I can exercise effectively in a gym with a variety of equipment.

SoFor these reasons, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with various equipment.

-> 다소 어색한 문장이 있어서 수정이 필요했습니다. 또한 자신에 주장에 대한 근거가 부족해 보입니다.

조금 더 구체적인 이유를 제시해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다.수고하셨습니다.