해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture taken outdoors.
First, I can see from this picture two people gardening in this picture.
One of them is a man with gray hair. she has a gray hair.
The other is a woman wearing a hat.
All of them They are wearing gloves and holding yellow flowers a parted plant and wearing gloves.
In the background of the picture, I can see many tools and flowers.
-> 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 조금 더 자연스러운 문장으로 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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