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야한상상 | 2013.11.04 | 조회 547
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My favorite place is the familar and comfortable Tanchen which allows me to relax and enjoy lesure. Tanchen located near my home and takes about ten minutes on foot also. Tanchen is river connected to Sungnam and Yongin. Walking along Tanchen for a few minutes, I can arrive in Jungangpark and Yuldongpark located in Bundang. I have hobby riding bicycle, Tanchen is a bicycle rode and exercise facilities. So I used to go Tanchen to ride a bicycle, there is safe place Where are many people and allways turn on light in the night. Tanchen also can be saw the flow of the river and feel the cool breeze. Panoramic view of the Tanchen are warm sunshine and beautiful sunsets. Therefore, Tanchen help people live a healthy life and there is a public cultural place for everyone favorited exercise and nature.


 


Tanchen is located near my home /takes only about ten minutes to get there on foot. Tanchen is a river /I can arrive at / I enjoying riding bicycle,/ There are a lot of bicycle roads and exercise facilities. /I often go to Tanchen   ..... 더 보고싶은데 시간이...ㅠ 저녁에~


 


 


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