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간단한 영작 도와주세요. 제가 작문한것인데 문법적 오류가 있는지
도움토커 | 2013.11.13 | 조회 668

내용은 황금알 거위에 대한거 입니다..


그래서 강도와 도적을 만나서 둘다 잃었지만, 가족이 있어서 행복하다는 내용입니다.

제가 작문한것인데 문법적 오류가 있는지 잘부탁드립니다.


He went to his house. he met a bandit

     

Bandit said ‘Giving gold, I will not kill you’

The farmer thought ‘Life is the most important and I have a goose’

The bandit went and he was safe.

Then He met a wolf on his the way home.

wolf promised a his life if farmer give the goose.

The farmer thought ‘Life is the most important’

He was disappointed. but he realized when Arrived home

he has realized that he had a  treasure better than the gold because he saw his wife and daughter


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