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영작했는데, 영어를 잘 못해서 맞는지 잘 모르겠습니다 ㅠㅠ

 

한번 봐주시면 정말정말 감사하겠습니다 ㅠㅠ!

 

1. I sit on the benches, listen to music, take a rest and get out of the heat.

 

이렇게 쓰는 것보다 benches 뒤에 where I can listen to music~ 이렇게 붙이는게 더 자연스러울까요?

 

2. Suddenly, I was caught in a rain shower.

    I sheltered for some time from the shower in a nearby coffee shop.

    After I came into the coffee shop, my old friend also entered in an instant.

 

문장을 맞게 썼는지 잘 모르겠습니다...한번 봐주세요ㅠㅠ

 

3. Also, it is important to bring a water bottle, because otherwise, I will be thirsty.

 

because otherwise 이 부분 맞는건가요?