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I think exercising in a gym with equipment is the better.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, it is good to lose my weight.
About two years ago, I have had to lose my weight
during that period, I went to the gym and used a lot of equipment to do exercise.
As a result, I could can lose my weight.
Therefore, I think exercising in a gym with equipment is better.
-> 사소한 실수가 있어 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사하신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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