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I think exercising outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment.

Because if when you exercise outdoors, you can enjoy the sunshine, which get a sunrise that is good for our your health.

And you might also can also meet friends if while you are outside. exercise outdoors.

And also In addition, you can walk and or jog around the park, which helps you refreshed.

So, you can get a refresh.

And if you exercising outdoors also gives you a greater sense of freedom compared to being indoors. can be free than exercise indoors.

So That’s why, I think exercising outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment.

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