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Yes, I think It is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
Let me explain why I think this way.
First of all, Exercising in a gym with equipment helps people stay motivated
gives the motivation to people
In from my experience, I also exercise in the gym, and I always feel motivated by seeing other people work out. get a motivation to other people everytime I exercise in the gym.
And also In addition, I can use the various types of equipment in a gym for free which
It’s is really convenient and useful
Second, according to the a recent news the article, The majority of people said that exercising in a gym with equipment is more effective.
Therefore, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
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