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Q7. 동네 밖 레스토랑에 자주 가는가

I often go to restaurant restaurants outside my neighborhood.

Because,
there are some[또는
several, a few] reasons,

First, restaurants food is very
delicious there is a variety of restaurants that I
can enjoy outside my neighborhood. I can enjoy Japanese, Chinese, Italian, Korean
restaurants and so on. Since I usually go out with my friends, not only can I
eat delicious food, but also spend quality time with my friends.

second, eating out
at a restaurant is... more convenient
than... cook cooking at home.

I’m too tired to cook
when I come back home from work/school. So I usually go outside to have a meal.

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