해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think go gym is better than exercise outdoors.

Because gym have many exercise for me.

But, exercise outdoors is that running.

And In winter the gym is not cold. It’s hot.

But, Outdoors is so cold.

In body is cold exercise is too dangerous.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.