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**f1212 | 2023.12.22 | 조회 57
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it’s better to exercise outdoors.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all I can save money.
From my experience when I was a high school student, My budget was very tight.
So I exercised outdoors, it’s very good for me.
Because what I able to save money and I don’t waste money for gym.
On top of them it’s very beneficial.


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