해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think It’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment is better to exercise than outdoors.

First, Whenever it’s raining or stormy, No matter rains or storms, 

I can do exercise everyday regardless of the weather with don’t care about the weathers.

I can stately exercise very well.

And Second, In the gym there are some masters called trainers can teach me how to exercise very well.

I can gain increase my muscle mass and be healthier healthy very well.

So, I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with the equipment.

-> 전반적으로 잘 구사해 주셨지만, 사소한 실수가 빈번히 발생합니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사하시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다.

수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.