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RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.03.12 | 조회 40
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think It’s better to exercise outdoors is better.
Because we I can get more energy from outside. and feel better.
If the weather is nice outside during exercise good, we I can get a some fresh air 
and enjoy the great view While exercising outdoors 
It makes me feel better.
Also, If I exercise outside, And we I can exercise with many other people 
regardless of the number of people.
So we can get more energy from each other by exercising. together.
For these reasons, I think it’s better to exercise outdoors.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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