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RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.07.08 | 조회 75
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Actually I prefer working out outside to the gym. recommend It’s better to exercise outdoor than in a gym.

Because It feels very refreshing outside. outside is very refreshments air fresher.

And I exercise easily if I want. easily do the exercise if what I want.

So and there are a lot of places outside these days. now days, many places around outside.

We usually normally see the exercise equipment tools around there.

So we don’t need to spend use our money to exercise for the exercise in a gym.

Actually  we  should spend out  for doing 

It isn’t bot recommended what I think.

what i think is it is not recommended. 

Those are the reasons I think it’s better to exercise outdoors.


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※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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