When i was young, i lived in busan which is one of the warm city of korea.
->>이거 맞는 문장인가요?
어색하면 더 자연스러운 문장으로 좀 바꿔주세요,
그리고
When i was young, i lived in busan which is one of the warm city of korea.
When i was young, i lived in busan, which is one of the warm city of korea.
->둘 중 뭐가 맞는거죠? 둘다 맞다면 차이점이 뭔가요????
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