해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it’s better to exercise outdoors.

Let me explain why I think this way.

Most of all I can save money.

From my experience My budget was very tight when I was a high school student.

So I exercised outdoors to save money. it’s was very good for me.

Because what I could was able to save money and I didn’t have to don’t waste money on for the gym.

On top of them it’s very beneficial.

->주어진 시간에 맞도록 답변을 더 준비하시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다. 

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.